I edited to try to make it more readable. I think if I make it too legible, it might lose some of it's zing. If I intricately weave details the character i'm creating becomes less imaginable. You can all spot the person talking at a fourth grade level-so I tried to reflect that in my creation. I added a few commas and periods, deleted two of the run on sentences, I hope you like it
This was almost unreadable, yet it still hit the nail on the head.
DFWow this is kinda freaky that somehow you know exactly what I like in life.. weird planes, guns and hookers?. Nailed it